Degree Poems
I have to write alot of poems as part of my degree, and I'd love feedback on them. So here are my poems.
Enjoy :) x
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You
You are everything I despise. You are everything I loathe. You are the reason why I was scrubbing myself in the shower.
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'Best friends'
The words used as jokes, The words at my expense, The words that cut, The words that hurt, Are the ones you throw like daggers. Someone to fuel, Someone to laugh, Someone to impress,
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The Secret Spot
The home from home, My wooden shack, Full of spiders, broken plastic and webs. The plastic windows moved in the panes, As the wind howled around it. The woodchip reminds me of Christmas,
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What You've Done
Fear hits my heart as the burn hits my throat. You are a ghost of my past which revisits to haunt. Try as I might, you’re scent stays with me, Nauseating me to the core.
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There
This is an imitation poem of Paul Monnete's poem "Here" written about his partner who died of AIDS.
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Scents
I breathe in the smell Of clean laundry still Being washed. Its scent Reminding me of the Good Old Days, when Grandma would Cook dinner on Saturday afternoon And let us sit on the bench
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Hands
The hands that had brown spots on, The hands with veins that resist my touch, The hands with the mole at the base of the thumb, All held me when I needed them.
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Is he?
Do I love him so much that I am willing to remove myself from the life I currently occupy, or do I hate his being with another so much that I will do anything for him not to be with the other?
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You
You are everything I despise. You are everything I loathe. You are the reason why I was scrubbing myself in the shower.
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The Princess
United by the hierphant, we bridge the sacred mysteries. No one knows whether to slap or hug the princess;
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You Two
You’ve made me rant, You’ve made me cry, You’ve made me lose my cool, But of all the things you’ve made me do You’ve made me hate you. You pushed me out, You laughed at me,
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You and Me
Touches my face, soft and gentle getting closer. My breath speeds up, his slows down mint on his breath. Nervous, It’s not what I expect but it’s what I want. He draws me to him
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Maybe This Time
Me You I cling to the memory of You and me together Your heartbeat next to mine But there’s more than distance between us, It’s a concrete block in the middle
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They Don't Know
Electricity. Bubbles. All because you touched my hand. Dread. Fear. The pain from before still has not subsided. Hope. Trust. You know all my secrets. Warmth. Caresses.
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Loss Of Innocence
I don’t want to hear the door shut, or the springs give way under you I feel your skin on mine can smell the mint sauce you had on your lamb for dinner I want to shut down
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