Poetry - Works in progress
By bluejohn
Poetry incomplete, seeking feedback and interpretation.
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dreaming in color
A noise in the distance grabs my attention for a millisecond, a constant rumbling a brief, instantly passing thought flashes across my consciousness
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A simpler life
Its all lollipops and my Sunday school shoes. Stolen kisses from the neighbor girl out back behind the big oak tree.
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August 28
I'm searching for the meaning in regular things (Love, Salvation, Sanity) Will contentment come with peace? Silence is the only cure I know for this disease
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Three years, 1 day
The words are lost in the motions A fleeting sense of relief leaves me as I begin to dread my own future (life, love, & the mystery) your eyes are wasted on (these) lost souls
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Hypnagogia
Is this my dream, feeding me full, lost and alone (fleeing from uncertain thoughts and demons) can you feel it?, eating (this hollowed existence once called reality) no one believes,
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October 8th
And the sunshine settled down in the west Moving my feet, with no particular direction Seeing the smile in your energy, in the air surrounding us I inhale and begin to grin
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weekend adventures of an art school drop out
popstars, cereal and childhood realities each of us with our own special little tragedy I've gone lost in this insomnia dark raining day cutting clear paths with a station wagon
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