weekend adventures of an art school drop out
By bluejohn
Tue, 27 Nov 2012
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popstars, cereal and childhood realities
each of us with our own special little tragedy
I've gone lost
in this insomnia, dark raining day
cutting clear paths with a station wagon
through a cornfield outside small town Iowa
maybe you remember me,
but probably have forgotten
and that's why I'm so anxious to lose this reality
so run it by me again, and I might reconsider
continuing to live my life of lies and habit
believing the only solution is you
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in this insomnia dark
in this insomnia dark raining day-- I'd put a comma after insomnia
and thats why I'm so anxious to lose this reality-- that's with an apostrophe
I like this poem but watch out for those typos
;)Pia
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