In a Valley of No Light or Darkness story

This is my story that I am writing that I hope to publish when it is finished. I will be posting each chapter here. Comment on how it can be improved I you happen to read any of the chapters.

In a Valley of No Light or Darkness - Prologue - The Creation

In a valley of no light or darkness, that neither exists nor doesn’t exist, walk two figures.

In a Valley of No Light or Darkness - Chapter 1, Part 1 - Lessons

Hammregeart returns to the village of his youngest student and has some surprises in store.