spack - only parentheses

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Fri, 2005-10-07 19:58

Brighton Rock

spack - only parentheses

this is a great poem.

enough said.

ta spack.

Fri, 2005-10-07 22:03

Brighton Rock

of course, if i loved it that much, i could at least be arsed to do a link!!! http://www.abctales.com/spack/only_parentheses

Mon, 2005-10-10 13:39

pepsoid

Ooh, it is rather lovely, in't it? Great metaphors, very visual & deceptively simple. Thanks for flagging this'un up, Bright! "P"

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Wed, 2005-10-12 17:17

ely_whitley

yep, loved it, saw it all and felt like I'd be spoken to. very good piece.

Wed, 2005-10-12 22:42

Brooklands

Thanks very much for flagging this Brighton Rock - I enjoyed your Guardian poem by the by. Cheers Pepsoid and Ely, glad you liked it. I like it when small poems work. There is so much less to get all perfectionisty about. Cheers, Joe

Thu, 2005-10-13 06:42

pepsoid

>>> There is so much less to get all perfectionisty about. ...But if you get one word wrong, It throbs like the proverbial sore thumb! - which, thankfully, in this case, you didn't... :-) "P"

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Thu, 2005-10-13 07:45

Brooklands

That's true. But, the aforementioned throbbing one word is usually so obvious that you know what to work on. Joe

Thu, 2005-10-13 13:54

pepsoid

Enough 'throbbing' metaphors, methinks... :-/ :-) * P * :-)

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