Father Time by yemassee

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Thu, 2006-02-02 13:40

tcook

Father Time by yemassee

Despite the typos and the need for a major tightening I like the idea behind this. It's a good modern fable:

http://www.abctales.com/story/yemassee/father-time

Thu, 2006-02-02 19:18

Juliet OC

i love the originality of this. My favourite line bearing in mind its a horse talking; "Time is money. Why just talking to you these last few minutes may have cost me dozen, nay, hundreds of dollars' ty for a great read, but go back and sort typos :) Juliet

Juliet

Fri, 2006-02-03 09:09

maisie

another nice story by this guy/gal, same clarity and lively writing....lovely..

maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!

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