Death's Uneasy Alliance by Queen Elf

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Death's Uneasy Alliance by Queen Elf

http://www.abctales.com/story/queenelf/deaths-uneasy-alliance-or-pull-up...

Yes, I HAVE read Terry Pratchett but I still liked this - Pestilence and co playing office politics and being able to liaise between the angelic and the demonic.

Thanks Neilmc. Actually I don't read much Pratchett. I'm really pleased this got a cherry, I don't normally do well with humour, I think I'm more inspired by the great standard of writing on here and all the helpful comments.

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QueenElf, This was a really nice read. I really liked this humorous trip, which took opportunity to poke fun at some of man’s deepest fears. I too, also liked the allegory toward office politics. It had me laughing from the very beginning. I thought the pace was good and pretty much consistent throughout. My biggest problem with the story was actually formatting. It was distracting at first, but the story was so interesting that I finally overcame it quickly. Usually, stories of this type are hard put to maintain interest with the reader from begining to end, but you did a wonderful job.
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