The Girl that could fly by Lisa Hinsley.

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The Girl that could fly by Lisa Hinsley.

http://www.abctales.com/story/lisa-hinsley/the-girl-that-could-fly

A great read. I was hooked from the beginning and it got better. Not quite sure about the weeks though? Was it meant to read that way?

Lisa this is ace, i love the way it takes you backwards, the repetition works really well and could go on ad infinitum. A really satisfying read. one minor point i got confused when she was in the shower as you talk about the w.. buds as if they were already there. I will read again - it could be me. Juliet

Juliet

Thanks for the flag and comments. This story seemed to need to go backwards to the meat of the story. I'll look again at the w buds, see what I can do to clarify. Thanks, Lisa
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