The Pie Shop by jingle

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The Pie Shop by jingle

http://www.abctales.com/story/jingle/the-pie-shop

This is so densely written, so chocka-full of little details and descriptions, I can almost taste the gravy. A meandering and pleasant trip down Nostalgia Lane.

very good. Although I don't understand half of what Archergirl just said, I have to agree. Congratulations on your cherry pick jingle. :)

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

Thank you both for the kind comments...very encouraging. And Thank You too Archergirl for the Cherry. I can't tell how pleased that made me. I have sent you an email but for reasons I don't understand emails from this site never seem to arrive. I'll be interested to know if you recieved it.
i could really see the pie-shop and smell the food and hear the banter. A lovely read. Juliet

Juliet

Thank you Juliet OC. Very kind of you. Most encouraging. Glad you enjoyed it.
Congrats, don't know I passed this one by, it must have been a busy day. You've just jogged my memory of something I was going to attempt to write. Your story brought back some happy memories, I did I was an oldie. LOL.

Lfuller

Thank You QueenElf, much appreciated, glad you liked it. I hope you write your piece, I look forward to seeing it.
Very nostalgic, very enjoyable, captured the images nicely. Congratulations nobody
Hi Jingle, my poem is rather dark, but I have another story in mind, much more upbeat with the nostaligia.

Lfuller

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