A slip of the hand (edit) Juliet OC

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A slip of the hand (edit) Juliet OC

http://www.abctales.com/node/551621

Enjoyed this the first time - the second as well. Rounder and fuller now, particularly poignant the line, " Our eyes lock and I glimpse us in the corner of her left eye......"
You work hard Juliet OC. Ty Tina

Liked this very much - a different take on domestic violence with even-handed sympathy.
You never fail to amaze me with your writing, every line is used to great effect, I'd like to nominate this for story of the week.

Lfuller

I like this story very much. Great twist to it. Odd really but it always comes as a shock when domestic violence reverses what most consider to be the norm. To me any form domestic violence is abhorrent but there seems to be a lot of it about, not all of it physical. Congratulations though a great story.
Good read Juliet, a most unusual subject, normally the writings about the other way round. Oh! one typo error, "I don't wont to go, Can't go" is it meant to be "want". Well done on the cherry nobody
ty for all your comments, i'm glad the piece conveyed what i had hoped a fresh take on domestic violence. Juliet

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