Fools Gold by BBF

The ones that got me were- "watch Ikea burn and the people weep". Sorry I don't comment often enough on your poetry BBF, sometimes it's too darn clever for me.

I can't help thinking that the idea in the first two stanzas should have been taken further, rather than let it lapse (lapse?? I think so,) into a resolution where the poet goes back to nature. There are many more arrows you could draw from that particular quiver, BBF.

Well I've only just graduated from the school of rhyme, so it seems clever to me. :)