An experience Mikepyro

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Wed, 2006-05-24 23:58

Silver Spun Sand

An experience Mikepyro

Extremely moving, beautifully written in a maturity that belies the author's age. Just Great! Ty SSS

Thu, 2006-05-25 16:56

mikepyro

http://www.abctales.com/story/mikepyro/an-experience here's the link everyone. Thanks alot Silver, i got two things today, a flag on my poem and i learned a new word 'belies'! yay!

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

Sat, 2006-05-27 16:46

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Tasha-Rae

Mikepyro!!! That poem was great, and I really enjoyed it, it was moving, and inspiring! Mikepyro, your the best!!! (and I'm saying that because I know you personally)!!!!

Thu, 2006-05-25 17:17

poetjude

I thought the stories would all betruth. But no, they have turned out to belies jude "Cacoethes scribendi" http://www.judesworld.net

Thu, 2006-05-25 19:39

Silver Spun Sand

Sorry Mike - forgot the link - guess it was rather late last night when I flagged it. Very droll jude - like it!

Thu, 2006-05-25 20:55

archergirl

http://www.abctales.com/story/mikepyro/an-experience Try this link. Very poignant and bittersweet.

Fri, 2006-05-26 16:49

mikepyro

thanks everyone. don't mind the link thing SSS, it doesn't matter.

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

Fri, 2006-05-26 16:49

mikepyro

thanks everyone. don't mind the link thing SSS, it doesn't matter.

Give me the beat boys and free my soul! I wanna getta lost in ya rock n' roll and drift away. Drift away...

Sat, 2006-05-27 18:18

neilmc

Just wish I could have written with that kind of insight at 15. Moving without being too sentimental.

Sun, 2006-05-28 16:52

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ilsa rabia

Mikepyro, I enjoyed this; it's easy flowing and conversational. I think that added to making it all the more personal. The reaction Jonesy had towards his impending death seems remarkable--no bitterness or sense of unfairness. This attitude was a tremendous gift for his friends. Well done! - ilsa

Sun, 2006-05-28 20:26

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Juliet OC

love the film refs at beginning an end. a really beautiful piece. Juliet

Juliet

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