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Tue, 2010-01-05 22:50

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Hi,

I've just signed up and posted a few stories from a collection I've been writing for a while now.

http://www.abctales.com/set/pascaljbarry/shrtstrys

I would appreciate any feedback or comments. Feel free to go as far as you like in your response.

Thanks

Pascal

Wed, 2010-01-06 15:17

tcook

I've read 'Tears' and I like it very much. It has an Alice in Wonderland feel about it - I guess that's the tears. I think that the early section is a little overlong and could be cut by a few pars but all in all I enjoyed it immensely. We are a community of writers and it is usual to give feedback first - and then it will come to you! As ye sow, so shall ye reap and all that.

Wed, 2010-01-06 15:35

PascalJBarry

Thanks to both of you for your considered comments. I appreciate the comment about giving feedback first, looking forward to getting involved and contributing positively to the site. Pascal

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