Generic "please rate my story" thread in which I beg for any feedback, good or bad

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Mon, 2012-05-07 08:21

Statement about how I am not worthy of your time. Looking for some feedback for a couple stories. If you could, I would love you forever. Both good and bad feedback would be great. Also will comment on your work. So. yeah. Let the backscratching commence!....please.

http://abctales.com/story/ibahas1/box-boy-goes-hell

http://abctales.com/story/ibahas1/sleep-well-my-friend-and-dream-large-w...

To further convince you, here's a cute picture of Puss In Boots from Shrek 2. Enjoy

Mon, 2012-05-07 08:23

Ibahas1

Derp. New to this forum thingy http://southendfamilyreunion.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/09/cat-shrek.jpg -- I can never take Toyota Highlanders seriously after seeing the movie. I want to modify one with a scottish flag on the back, two swords along the sides, sword hood ornament, and a horn modified to spout the quote "THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE!”

- Ian Bahas

Mon, 2012-05-07 08:51

Parson Thru

Commented on number 1. Will try to get something on number 2 later! Really imaginative stuff! Gets the brain going. Hope the comments are useful.

Parson Thru

Mon, 2012-05-07 14:25

lavadis

The problem is Ibahas that I have frequently seen people ask for comments on their work in the forum in return for comments on their work. I have responded by commenting on the work of these people (as I do often in any event) and the response has been silence!! So can I suggest you comment on my work (and the work of others on the site) and I will gladly comment on yours, which from the above sounds like it is excellent.

Mon, 2012-05-07 17:51

Ibahas1

Here's the picture. new to this forum. http://i46.tinypic.com/710hfm.jpg

- Ian Bahas

Mon, 2012-05-07 18:34

steve_elliott04

Read the first piece. Hope my comment was in some way helpful! I'll try and set aside some time for the second piece soon. Steve.

Mon, 2012-05-07 18:53

Ibahas1

I really appreciate all the feedback I am getting for these stories. Really giving me a lot to think about. I am relatively new to writing, so sorry if my comments are a bit basic.

- Ian Bahas

Mon, 2012-05-07 19:15

steve_elliott04

That's no problem, I'm relatively new to writing too. Any reader can give a good review, even if it's a basic one. Just say what worked for you and why (if you know why), and/or what didn't work. Perfect starting place for any review! I hope you enjoy and benefit from this site as much as I have so far! Steve.

Tue, 2012-05-08 11:44

Sooz006

The best way to get feedback, my friend, is to comment on the work of others. But seeing as you asked so nicely. I'll take the second as most people seem to have started with the first.

Wed, 2012-05-09 07:02

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Parson Thru

It's a pleasure to read your stories. Sooz006 has a good point. Good luck with your writing.

Parson Thru

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