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25 of my 573 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 26 votes
Laurie Avadis
Hello wonderful people - my first novel - Ex was published by UnBound on the 27th August 2015. To buy it go to http://www.amazon.co.uk/Ex-Laurie-Avadis/dp/1783520876/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF...
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A different way to measure time
When I arrived in the park, the autumn leaves had formed an auburn duvet on my usual bench. Moments after I had begun sketching tree skeletons in...
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Sea swimmer
Plunging blind into the brutal ether jagged, tangential all-consuming and caressing a cold I cannot describe swimming in the direction of emptiness...
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Muscle memory
My father never went away he just became a yesterday he told me people swing the bat he wasn't willing to do that his father taught him to be free...
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Even in peacetime no one can dream
On that day the valley was flayed raw by sunlight It was shortly after a truce had been declared between Winter and Spring Children were in the...
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The bridge of Sante Fe
Behind a dirty sunset near the bridge of Sante Fe she sat alone clutching her passport in a hand that had waved and punched and pointed She left...
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Brilliant writer gets justified accolade
Posted on Mon, 17 Nov 2014
Very well deserved Richard. It ia apparent that you live in the real world with your eyes wide open and write intruitivy and instinctively about what the every day world slams into your field of vision.
Sheryl thought for a moment. ‘How...
Read full commentPosted in Neighbourhood Blues
Tight shut
Posted on Wed, 13 Nov 2024
An enigmaticly dark flight of the imagination which I thoroughly enjoyed. Very well written.
Read full commentPosted in The Cinnabar Moth
Really well written
Posted on Tue, 01 Oct 2024
A very engaging idea which is eloquently developed and becomes a wild ride. Really good
Read full commentPosted in EARTH FROM THE AIR
Very interesting work
Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2024
Some lovely phrases and evocative images from an acomplished writer.
Read full commentPosted in The Staircase
Absolutely intriguing
Posted on Sun, 05 Nov 2023
I had no idea where this was headed from start to finish. Beautiful
Read full commentPosted in The Fisherwoman and the Sea
This sucked me in like a squid
Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2022
A spellbinding journey- loved every minute of it.
Read full commentPosted in THE SQUID SISTERS - Part 2
I really enjoyed this
Posted on Sat, 04 Jul 2020
The imigary is beautifully crafted
Read full commentPosted in Puss Moths
Very kind
Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020
Thank you Rachel it was hard to write.
Read full commentPosted in All the lost places
I cannot tell you how grateful I am airyfairy
Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020
I was sitting here for my 8th week alone in this house because of the lock down. Still stumbling over possessions which belong to someone long gone in some ways but still here in others. Thank you for your kind words. This was not at all easy to...
Read full commentPosted in All the lost places
Brilliant poem
Posted on Sun, 22 Dec 2019
I really enjoyed it
Read full commentPosted in God rest ye merry, gentlemen
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