WIGS...Not really by Venson

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Fri, 2006-03-10 16:26

http://www.abctales.com/story/venson/wigs-but-not-really

I'm not sure i understand all of this - particularly the title - but the descriptions are very vivid - A prostitutes lament?

fave lines:

Arch your back, sweet harlot,
and watch it all pay to disappear
within your make-up stains
just one more time.

Juliet

Fri, 2006-03-10 18:32

archergirl

Yeah, I'm not quite sure what to make of it. I like the next-to-last stanza as well, but your fave lines are also mine. Interesting reading...

Sat, 2006-03-11 10:28

archergirl

But I wasn't sure just how the percentage stanza was connected to the rest of it, except kinda by proxy. I liked the images, though. The bruised thighs were ... evocative.

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