New Story and Poem of the week and Inspiration Point

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Fri, 2007-05-18 13:09

Congrats to midge and sixdotcell for this week's accolades. I suggest that a little discussion on sixdotcell's story might be in order. Is it just confused or is it very good? Did you follow it? What did you like or dislike about it?

Fri, 2007-05-18 14:27

Juliet OC

I remember reading this quite awhile back, so for me this edited version is much more coherent and held together. I stil think the reader has to work a little too hard at understanding the scenes, and it needs further editing. But the characters are so intriguing - it reads like an opening to a novel, i do hope there is more. Juliet

Juliet

Fri, 2007-05-18 18:00

tcook

It is confusing - it was a strange pick for SoW but the undisputable quality of the writing tipped the balance for me. It's a gem and it could end up as something truly brilliant.

Mon, 2007-05-28 23:27

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6dotcell

Thanks so much for the SW pick. It made me feel very good Sunday. I guess I prefer sometimes not to differentiate between space and time. Memory is an amorphous thing, and worlds tend to exist within one another or right next to one another. J. riley

Sat, 2007-05-26 00:14

6dotcell

I guess that currently I'm more obsessed with space than time; if that's not too trite. I'm trying to get across a perpetual now, worlds existing within and next to one another. Probably this is sounding postmodern, but that isn't my intention. I'm just wondering where does one go, and what is he looking for?J. riley

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