need advice
Sun, 2005-11-06 01:19
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need advice
okay, I had the first chapter of a story up but I was unhappy with it. I changed it to a first person perspective and think it's a lot better now so if anyone read the first chapter of "The Idle Child and the Eccentric Gentleman"before the 6th of November please read it now and tell me if it's any better.
fergal
I will read both - but I didn't read the first one. Do you still have a copy of it?
ancl
i didn't save my old copy so nope. I didn't really think this plan through but thanks a million anyway!