Home Read Write Forums Blogs Pimp & Prostittute by silverspunsand 5 posts / 0 new Topic locked Last post Sun, 2006-05-07 00:31 #1 sky Pimp & Prostittute by silverspunsand again - another good one sss. Also I liked the Air-Kisses poem. Congrats for the cherry! One of my favourites of yours is A place they call Camelot. Really good. Sun, 2006-05-07 02:37 #2 Foster http://www.abctales.com/story/silver-spun-sand/pimp-and-prostitute I also liked this one, Tina (but a link would've helped me find it). Your poems have a way of churning along, and this one reads very well. Funny, too. foster Sun, 2006-05-07 02:38 #3 Foster http://www.abctales.com/story/silver-spun-sand/pimp-and-prostitute I also liked this one, Tina (but a link would've helped me find it). Your poems have a way of churning along, and this one reads very well. Funny, too. foster Sun, 2006-05-07 08:40 #4 Juliet OC a great rythmn and intriguing tale - my only crit - the last line didn't work for me, don't think it needs the 'on' Juliet Juliet Sun, 2006-05-07 09:17 #5 Silver Spun Sand Ta so much Sky and Foster and Juliet. By the way - I quite agree. Have taken out the offending word!! Ty all SSS Topic locked
Pimp & Prostittute by silverspunsand 5 posts / 0 new Topic locked Last post Sun, 2006-05-07 00:31 #1 sky Pimp & Prostittute by silverspunsand again - another good one sss. Also I liked the Air-Kisses poem. Congrats for the cherry! One of my favourites of yours is A place they call Camelot. Really good. Sun, 2006-05-07 02:37 #2 Foster http://www.abctales.com/story/silver-spun-sand/pimp-and-prostitute I also liked this one, Tina (but a link would've helped me find it). Your poems have a way of churning along, and this one reads very well. Funny, too. foster Sun, 2006-05-07 02:38 #3 Foster http://www.abctales.com/story/silver-spun-sand/pimp-and-prostitute I also liked this one, Tina (but a link would've helped me find it). Your poems have a way of churning along, and this one reads very well. Funny, too. foster Sun, 2006-05-07 08:40 #4 Juliet OC a great rythmn and intriguing tale - my only crit - the last line didn't work for me, don't think it needs the 'on' Juliet Juliet Sun, 2006-05-07 09:17 #5 Silver Spun Sand Ta so much Sky and Foster and Juliet. By the way - I quite agree. Have taken out the offending word!! Ty all SSS Topic locked
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