Prelude to a grope - by span
Thu, 2006-01-26 15:22
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Prelude to a grope - by span
You are very good at doing these dark scenes. Butte rbean eyes I like because I've always thought butter beans a little veiny and sinister. I liked the mention of the snooker club ID. And the stacatto shift.
There is a humour in it too, which is dark.
I want to swoop in and show that girl that the world is wonderful, and she shouldn't let a man with snooker club ID piss withing ten yards of her.
Nice.
fergal
oops forgot this - http://www.abctales.com/story/span/barred-breast-entry-or-prelude-to-a-g...
Edgar_Whitter
This was funny. I enjoyed it very much.
span
why thank you, thank you very much Edgar. So glad it's funny!
It's alright she got me as her mate to tell her the world is a beautiful place.
Dark scenes are easy to write and fun non?
Thank you Fergal!
I find this rather funny myself.
Hannah