Eleanor's (Souls) Music by polidori

oh cant agree more, ......... now i'm off to fall into clover :)

Just popped on quick to post something new and I noticed I had a cherry. So a big thank you. - That’s put a smile on me face.

Stopped for a read, and loved what was written. You created a dreamy flowery smell and sight sensation. Loved it! Lisa

this contains beautiful and original description but also a great plot - a modern dark fairy tale. Fav line - though there are many too choose from. 'In the next field the ears of corn listened intently; gossip from the long grass was always highly sought after.' My only crit - the end was a little unclear - do they get sucked into the ipod - and if so do they have to perform in order to escape- just felt like i wanted a little bit more explanation. great read, ty. Juliet

Thanks Juliet. Apple, in their infinite wisdom, don’t provide software to enable you to download from an ipod. Therefore, there is no escape!