Dedication's What You Need by warden

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Thu, 2006-03-09 13:01

tcook

Dedication's What You Need by warden

I like this especially for its subject matter rather than its style. It works really well:

http://www.abctales.com/story/warden/dedications-what-you-need

Thu, 2006-03-09 13:23

Brooklands

Yes - it's great. Takes a trope to its unnatural conclusion. Nice one. Joe

Thu, 2006-03-09 13:44

warden

Thanks for your comments. much appreciated. I think it's still needs some finessing and I'm trying hard to shake this rhyming frame of mind I'm currently finding myself in!

Thu, 2006-03-09 14:24

maisie

mucho enjoyed!! thanks :)

maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!

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