A Light in the Closet by jxmartin

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A Light in the Closet by jxmartin

Really enjoyed this although I was wondering as to why the woman didn't appear?
A pity it ended so soon.A good read.

Sky, I am pleased you enjoyed "A Light in the closet." I had no special reason for not allowing the "woman to appear." I think growing up with "Star Trek" and the notion of " transporters," made me think of the difficulties involved.I also thought that some limitations, on the "magical properties" of the island, might give more credibility to the whole. Perhaps in a future rewrite, I might just pen that concept in and see where it goes.Thanks for taking time to comment. J.X.M
lol @ difficulties involved! I guess you are right there! The story could go on and on with different places and situations? As I read this I could visualise it all as a movie. Good luck - hope you carry on with it.
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