Muse - Macmanaman

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Muse - Macmanaman

I'm going to be accused of nepotism, but I don't care. Someone else would have flagged it, anyway:

http://www.abctales.com/story/mcmanaman/muse

I'm really struggling to rein in the hyperbole here; robust, lucid, gleaming with craftsmanship. No standout lines, so to speak - just a very well realised whole, all the more powerful for its use of understatement. I'm sure everyone who reads this will agree it's utterly top. Would love to hear more in this voice!

Nepotis me up. This is ace. My my... a refreshing start to the day. What fluid and subtle tone changes you have in your magic box Jon. Span
what a wonderful portrait of 'dysfunctional/ gifted' couple - the dependency was wonderfully portrayed - i would have liked more of they idiosyncracies. It conveys that fine line between madness and genius. great ending. Juliet

Juliet

Thanks guys. it's nice to write in different voices, maybe i'll try some more of this. Thanks for the flag mc
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