meet the jackpot twins - rokkitnite

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Thu, 2006-06-22 17:37

http://www.abctales.com/story/rokkitnite/fifth-episode---meet-the-jackpo...

I'll have to admit it - I'm very jealous of this! Fantastic (in the true sense) descriptions of fantastic scenarios, and reminded me of so many writers i like, but really is such an original piece.
At times i was overwhelmed by the sheer density of the writing, and some phrases and desriptions struck me as trying too hard to be bizarre, but is overall a well-crafted work of the imagination.
Is there more? Other episodes?

Thu, 2006-06-22 17:49

rokkitnite

Why yes JD, yes there are: http://www.abctales.com/node/553360 http://www.abctales.com/node/553361 http://www.abctales.com/node/553362 http://www.abctales.com/node/553363 Episodes 1-4, there. I'm sure you're right about some bits being a little OTT - it's a work in process, and I periodically go back to tidy up previous chapters. That said, I'm more interested in providing an entertaining sentence-by-sentence experience than developing complex characters and an overarching plot. It's silly, frothy anarchy, and I hope readers can have fun with it.

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