Help me please!
Tue, 2005-10-04 20:06
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Help me please!
Can anyone help me by giving me some advice over my last posted piece, 'My Demon'? It is the first chapter of a book that I'm in the middle of writing (75% written) and I would very much appreciate people telling me what's wrong/how I can improve.
Thank you in advance!!!
Lisa
The All New Pepsoid the Second!
The All New Pepsoid the Second!
Laura
www.collaborativewritingchallenge.com(link is external)
Laura
www.collaborativewritingchallenge.com(link is external)
The All New Pepsoid the Second!