Bum Sex by msbeswick

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Bum Sex by msbeswick

http://www.abctales.com/story/mbeswick/bum-sex

In the beginning, there was darkness. Then God, or cosmic laws, or whatever you choose to put in place as the grand 'first mover' set about a chain of events which created the universe, and chemical reactions of increasing complexity, which ultimately led to the creation of planets, of atmosphere, bacteria, then at last, on one planet, sentient life. This sentient life, in its turn, developed over millions upon millions of years into ever more complex forms, at last creating a species capable of using tools, and, critically, language and reflexive thought. These human beings slowly developed mastery over their environment, manipulating the laws of nature to feed their young, power machines that made once laborious tasks simple, and ultimately, they were able to venture out into the cosmos that spawned them. Able to transcend their physical limitations and communicate across vast distances, these beings engaged continually in an intellectual and emotional communion, sharing insights, ideas, desires...
And so it was, that these conditions made possible 'Bum Sex' by msbeswick. My fellow star children, I invite you to marvel at the wonder of creation.

Does that mean you liked it, then?
I'm stunned.
Absolutely beautiful.
Oh BUM!

Lfuller

Hmm interesting, not sure why it's classed as spiritual, apart from that I dunno what to say, but then I don't know much about peotry so wouldn't be qualified to anyway. Harry Kerdean
I have now read “Bum Sex” by mbeswick six times trying to see some deeper meaning. After deep consideration I have come to the conclusion that “Bum Sex” is not a “polemic”. It is in fact absolute nonsense. Hey but what do I know? I preferred the Turbine Hall at Tate Modern when it housed three 30 megawatt steam turbine generators, instead of thousands of empty cardboard boxes. This comment is intended to be a polemic!
Six times! wow, you really must be desperate for entertainment!
camus, I like it!
Aah now BBF, you said you'd stop working for Chez Marcel. I recognise that review from the Chili Mango in Goose Fat.
I liked it AND the recent one about his cock!

 

i like the way you have conveyed the noise of sex, i keep thinking about writing a piece where someone hits their thumb with a hammer - what would that noise look like in writing? As a piece of spiritual work not so sure :) Juliet

Juliet

Not much more to say. It made me laugh and I had a picture of exactly what was happening and that, I believe, makes good poetry. Stewart
i agree with stewart. As you´re reading, you can almost picture the scene (not in too much detail obviously). Come on ladies, admit it, at one time or another its happened to us all
no it hasn't

 

:) Juliet

Juliet

............the bottom line - in bottom lines..........?

 

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