He Put A Crimp In My Day by span

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He Put A Crimp In My Day by span

http://www.abctales.com/story/span/he-put-a-crimp-in-my-day

I thought this was really rather terrific.

Mundane details + extraordinary situation = woohooo!

Cheers,

Mark

Gah, sorry Fergal and Markbrown, I must seem very ungrateful for not having replied to this thread. To my shame I was in fact unaware of its existence and was just alerted to it. Thanks, thank you, cheers. Fergal, thank you muchos for calling me your favourite poet, a great honour indeed. Got a bit nervous when I read that, think it was excitement. And thank you Mark for flagging it. Dont think any of me poems have ever produced a 'woohoo' before. That pleases me. The mundane detail thing is fun I only worry that it is boring. Glad you think it works and thank you for the thread. Span
I agree that is terrific. Span is probably my favourite poet. The last line of this I like a lot, it just tops the whole shebang off nicely. I remember span saying once on here that she knows she likes a poem when she wishes she had written it herself. Well I wish I'd written this, but I know I never could because it is definitely, distinctively, span.
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