THIS BEAUTIFUL SHIP

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Wed, 2006-02-15 12:03

THIS BEAUTIFUL SHIP

http://www.abctales.com/node/510985

I came to this little story randomly. It made me smile awhile! Very funny! Didn't get the number bit, but it give it a sureal sense -- English whimsy, a little Lennonesque. Love the diaologue, and the old man! very well done.
I can't believe it has only been read a hundred times -- over looked I think. What do others think?

Chris Whitley

Wed, 2006-02-15 12:42

Brooklands

I think the number's are ABCtales formatting going crazy, not a hint that this might be one of Rokkitnite's super ambitious code-breaker stories. Joe

Wed, 2006-02-15 12:43

rokkitnite

Psst... the revolution is in three weeks...

Wed, 2006-02-15 12:56

Brooklands

You do realise you said that out loud? $&66575

Wed, 2006-02-15 15:51

lisa h

I give up, what were the numbers supposed to be???!!! Other than that, a beautifully written tale, fantastic imagery, a laugh at the end. Had I not been so distracted by the *&65654* numbers, it would have been even better! :) Lisa

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