Deep Soul Treasure by Ralph

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Deep Soul Treasure by Ralph

http://www.abctales.com/story/ralph/deep-soul-treasure-number-9

I liked this

Between,
a reason,
a season,
or forever.

Simple but effective...

Again RD has used lots of proper nouns in his imagery but this time I get at least one of them...

as cold as Bjork!

I liked those lines as well, the one thing that stops me commenting on poems with names in it, is because I'm a bit old to know some of them. LOL.

Lfuller

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