An Ant...............short story by Maisie

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An Ant...............short story by Maisie

http://www.abctales.com/story/maisie/an-ant-short-story

Enjoyed the second half of this little story, tremendously - the conversation between aunt B and the little boy, especially when he asks for an explanation as to why,

"Ants hold the world together."

(because), "They carry a kind of superglue with them everywhere and wherever there's a crack - they run along it sticking it back together again."

By the way, I think the predator for ants is an 'ant-eater' -spiney or not!!

Ty Maisie, SSS

thank you i will revise it .. possibly cut out of a lot ants meandering :)

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!

It has two concurrent sentences starting with 'it's almost' in the first paragraph, which you might want to revise. Loved that last line from the kid.

 

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