Perfect Playlist by thesnowman36

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Tue, 2006-08-15 13:34

This has so many twists in it that it's got to be worth a cherry. It has some typos - and Jimi Hendrix is 'Jimi', not 'Jimmy'!!! These things are annoying - but the story is well told, taut and tantalising. Give it a whirl:

http://www.abctales.com/story/thesnowman36/perfect-playlist

Tue, 2006-08-15 18:32

2Lou

Yes I enjoyed this too. For a long piece it held my attention 'til the end. Even certain parts that could have felt a bit of a stretch were saved by the strength of Casey's voice. Good stuff. (I agree it would benefit from a few edits and line breaks though.)

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Wed, 2006-08-16 23:09

thesnowman36

Thank you very much for your comments. It's funny that this story got a cherry award now, I've had it up here for almost two years now. It was apart of a novel I was writing (and still work on once in a while, although other projects have taken hold of my faculties). I'll do some editing and possibly put up some more of the story.

Mon, 2006-08-21 10:34

tcook

We do come back round to stuff from time to time - and different editors will read your work. These judgements are inevitably subjective and I can see why others might not have cherried your work previously. As it is, this is the first time I've read it - and I felt it deserving of a cherry!

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