working on a novel

that's nice dear

Big v, You need to work on your syntax first. Get the words in the right order, get some real characterisation going (not just that you feel let down and have to hack some woman up), get some plot. Try a short story first - give up on the poetry for a while - and let's try and help you get things straight.

Practise thoroughly before you commit yourself to writing one; as tcook said, try short stories and gradually write longer and longer ones.

Alternatively lock yourself in a room with enough whiskey and amphetamines for a fortnight and become the next Jack Kerouac. Syntax shouldn't be a problem if you take this approach.

"in writing, its not important if people love it or not whats improtant is that you have written something something from ur mind" I think that is beautiful and it doesn't matter whether people agree or not because I think it is beautiful. I think that with my mind.