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Time to Fly

These injuries are hard to heal.
My haunting nightmares appear so real.

Everday so dark and unclear.
My wholo body tenses up in fear.

With my back against the wall.
The weight of my suffering causes me to fall.

My heart aches with every burn.
My mind filled with a murderous yearn.

The days go by not shedding any light.
Constant gloom and shadow of night.

Staring at this abyss before my eyes.
I fall in with fear and start to cry.

I reach out for someone to take my hand.
Nothing but the feel of rocks and sand.

My black world continues to turn.
Slowly and painfully I start to learn.

I am doomed to surrender to my crime.
And piuck myself up every time.

No more crying it's my time to fly.
To break these chains and touch the sky