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Glad Sid got to shine, a
Posted on Thu, 22 Aug 2019
Glad Sid got to shine, a happy, gentle version of a disaster movie!
Read full commentPosted in from the bus' mouth …
"a version of me who is
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
"a version of me who is anonymous
to myself" I really liked that, feeling of being clean, or maybe unscarred?
"persistent nag of death;"reminder to carve out some meaning" Yet everything we think and write falls like leaves to the...
Read full commentPosted in Morning
These are great Rhiannon :0)
Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2019
These are great Rhiannon :0) Once when I was helping out on a school trip there was a little girl getting frightened, so we held hands and I asked her what we should talk about? She said her house, then told me all about her bedroom, and soon she...
Read full commentPosted in KidsSpeak
NO! If you think of your poem
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
NO! If you think of your poem like a lump of rock - I can pick it up and see some quartz sparkling but someone else picks it up from a slightly different angle and sees some copper veins, and another person maybe sees a face in the bumps and...
Read full commentPosted in Cathedrals
"quiet mines the years" I
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
"quiet mines the years" I thought at first this was about a cliff but now think it is a relationship? Makes me think of two people in armchairs on opposite sides of a room, not speaking, one looking at the profile of the other in the light, and...
Read full commentPosted in Cathedrals
sunshine, showers short, and
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
sunshine, showers short, and rainbows,
cuckoo calls and swooping swallows.
fresh and shining shade,
glowing green of woods and glade
How precious a home,
a haven that’s warm
of mosses, saturated, soft;...
Read full commentPosted in Through the year month by month
I love the description
Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2019
I love the description "withers and fills" . Scrolling back up top to the top of the poem, was surprised how short it is as it is so full of images
Read full commentPosted in prairie river flowing
wow! what a brilliant
Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2019
wow! what a brilliant wonderful amazing reader you are! I could listen to you reading all day :0) I'm really glad you posted this one! Please do a Craven Danger one with lots of dialogue?
Read full commentPosted in Lincoln's Crumpled Paper IP
The weight on your shoulder,
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
The weight on your shoulder, that is the most precious feeling, isnt it? I didn't feel I was a mother till I felt that, like somehow I was balanced. And the sense of unbalance you brought to the story was so strong, like the narrator couldn't be...
Read full commentPosted in Katy, A Ghost Story (IP)
this is one of your intense
Posted on Sat, 10 Aug 2019
this is one of your intense mood creations, the stillness (I hope not loneliness) in this place, and the weather/life disturbing outside. And the wondering what conversation caused the ringing in your ears. Covers the same weather as Jenny's...
Read full commentPosted in In perpetuity
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