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Another chapter flies by.

Posted on Thu, 11 Apr 2013

Another chapter flies by. Poor Si! What an awful upbringing. Gregor sounds meaner by the minute. Onward bound to Chapter 9. There's a lovely pace you write with. This must have taken you ages to pull together.. 

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"...but winsomely explain.."

Posted on Thu, 18 May 2023

"...but winsomely explain.." You don't see the word "winsomely" used much these days. I like the razor sharp way you have linked your poem to the proverb, Rhiannon. "Carelessly wielding words recklessly.." Yes, a lovely rhythm to the whole thing...

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"...Unfortunately he was not

Posted on Wed, 17 May 2023

"...Unfortunately he was not available for the King Charles III’s Coronation, due to the impossibility of using Time Travel at the time of David and Soloman..." If only the Coronation had been an Alfred Muggins time-travel saga - that would have...

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Poor old Dawson stuck in

Posted on Thu, 24 Jan 2013

Poor old Dawson stuck in pokey. Here's hoping Cinnamon can break him out. You have finished on a cliff-hanger again with the two riders. I shall find out more in Chapter Eight tomorrow :)

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Ah great twist - I thought

Posted on Fri, 28 Sep 2012

Ah great twist - I thought Dawson was going to escape. Again, great tension built and the plot bubbling with his travelling across worlds like that. The Master sounds a big grim. We'll find out soon enough. On to Chapter 7...

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"...how long static in this

Posted on Tue, 16 May 2023

"...how long static in this unpolluted spot
for lichens to attach and grow
encrusting?"

Beauty can be in the unlikeliest of places, even on a white van. I love the notion that nature sweeps over things when left abandoned like...

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Flocks of geese to solve the

Posted on Tue, 16 May 2023

Flocks of geese to solve the shortage of workers post Brexit. Well, yes! Your imagination continues to deliver the sauce (and, in turn, turnips by the looks of it). Adroitly done as always, Jane.

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"...fluttering a dance where

Posted on Wed, 17 May 2023

"...fluttering a dance where

sunlight shines on a

dappled carpet of bluebells."

 

A dreamy poem about a miraculous transformation. Enjoyed, of course :)

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Enjoyed chapter 5. What can

Posted on Mon, 30 Jul 2012

Enjoyed chapter 5. What can this threatening mass be? It takes skill to move from one setting to another and you have done it with ease with this chapter. Looking forward to seeing what the fledgling pilots get up to. Chapters 6 and beyond...

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Another chapter in - the

Posted on Thu, 21 Jun 2012

Another chapter in - the picture you draw of stone age travellers is so good. Really liked the sequence of the little girl eventually being found via Tawny the (magic) owl. Onwards to chapter 5...

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