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Great story. Kinda like a

Posted on Sun, 23 Apr 2023

Great story. Kinda like a through the looking glass feel. The mystery of a wonderful trunk unveiled. And an enigmatic ending. Enjoyed. 

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"It’s a long sucking nose

Posted on Thu, 27 Apr 2023

"It’s a long sucking nose
working like a hose..."

What a great opening. It's a dynamic poem that brings the elephant to life. Nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul

 

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That's quite an inner

Posted on Sun, 23 Apr 2023

That's quite an inner universe you discovered within your eyes. It's amazing where you can go to by simply closing them. You have been on some amazing journeys although wanting to scratch your eyes out at one point is a high price to pay. Enjoyed...

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I hope Alfred's new job doesn

Posted on Tue, 25 Apr 2023

I hope Alfred's new job doesn't drain him too much. I did feel for him being marooned in Tesco when all he wanted to do was chill at home. It's reassuring to see written reports still coming in despite the demands on his time. Maybe King Henry...

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Such a lot of fine detail and

Posted on Tue, 25 Apr 2023

Such a lot of fine detail and what sits like a fun poem. You have done a grand job of weaving such technical aspects into this. Very nicely done indeed, Rhiannon. Paul 

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"..here a red admiral wakes

Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2023

"..here a red admiral wakes

at warm's alarm, recalls.... flight!"

 

The poem reads like an artist's notebook at times. So much going on. You bring the sights and colours to life so well interwoven with snap shots of human...

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"My radiological consultant

Posted on Mon, 24 Apr 2023

"My radiological consultant was a very pretty woman - black brocade dress, spike heals - just how you expect your hospital staff to dress." I do love your sense of humour even in the trickiest of circumstances, That final paragraph is a huge...

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"Wish earth's anguish

Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2023

"Wish earth's anguish

would diminish...."

Articulate and a sentiment wished by many. Nicely done, Jenny ;)

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"....drowsy

Posted on Mon, 24 Apr 2023

"....drowsy

spirits now alert to the

warmer air...and joy

connected to this land."

Some wonderful images conjured, Jenny. Enjoyed your bucolic reveries, of course. Paul :)

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"Rough-coated cucumber-like

Posted on Fri, 21 Apr 2023

"Rough coated cucumber-like weed...."

 

Sounds extraordinary and you bring it to life with your poem, Rhiannon. Fascinating video, as well. Paul :) 

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