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I have 1155 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2147643 times and 1170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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The Gods of Selfies

Gods of selfies lets you rip yourself in two Make yourself anew Like a river bursting its banks And the sky licked ashore You were pure as snow...
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A statue of you

A statue bright as a new grave Thick and unquick stone The best laid to rest Glory, glory, glory! Gene ology drowned in unbright light Framed in a...
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what comes after Christmas 3

The basement smelt damp and faintly of pee. A knot grew in Carl’s gut. He hurried with Naama in his arm. He was a wee man and she was no weight at...
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what comes after Christmas 2

Carl grew so weary sitting beside her bed his shoulders were mudflats. It seemed so long ago. He couldn’t remember how it came to this. The world...
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Pick Up

Almost home. Angel hurried up in the hill at Byron Street, pulling her coat tighter around her flowery Boots' blouse, the high winds catching in her...
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1562 of my comments have received 1594 Great Feedback votes

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ah, superpowers. I'd love one

Posted on Sun, 08 Sep 2024

ah, superpowers. I'd love one, but the price is too high. 

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Posted in A hundred moments in autism - A trip to the cinema

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I used to get hot flushes

Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2024

I used to get hot flushes when I tried to talk to any beautiful girls I'd been at school with. I used the 15 pints and I was ready to roar, rather than the Erazofuge. As I got older I tried cutting down to a reasonable 12 pints. But I had to up...

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Posted in Erazofuge

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tragic, like you I don't have

Posted on Sat, 01 Dec 2018

tragic, like you I don't have an answer. Poverty, not morals is the key. We use the latter as a scapegoat, a standared practice by, for example, Jenhovah Witnesses to get a foot in the door, is to say how much worse the world is getting. They've...

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Posted in When Death Comes Too Soon

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cybermates, Spencer and

Posted on Fri, 10 Jan 2025

cybermates, Spencer and tweezers. It's all gadgets going. 

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 47

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aha. Spencer reaps revenge

Posted on Thu, 02 Jan 2025

aha. Spencer reaps revenge for his bad wiring! We need some scary music. Dddddddddddddddddddd.

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Posted in Parcel for You - Part 46

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great stuff. good definitions

Posted on Fri, 04 Oct 2024

great stuff. good definitions of sheep singular and plural. They replaced people in large parts of the Highlands and Island, while not being very large. My guess is Spencer and his ilk will do the same with us. 

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Posted in Parcel for you....Part 36

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wonderful storytelling. 

Posted on Tue, 24 Sep 2024

wonderful storytelling. 

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Posted in Tom Tom Turnaround (2)

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red, red, and read. There

Posted on Sun, 01 Sep 2024

red, red, and read. There should be rage, but it is hidden in pop-up stories. 

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Posted in They Were Only Children

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I did have a fight with Marti

Posted on Thu, 15 Aug 2024

I did have a fight with Marti Pellow's brother, we called him Kojak, after he tried to lift a few can from our carry out. Love was all arounds us. So the feeling grows. 

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Posted in Benches & Hedges

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doubt unravels us, but

Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2024

doubt unravels us, but sometimes that can be a good thing. the greatest lie may be the one we tell ourselves. 

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Posted in Doubt

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