That eye that watches you

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The Drop Zone

The Drop Zone 1. Patrick Black was drinking potent local whiskey celebrating a decade as a free man roaming Asia drunk. At his own whim he’d entered...

The Ripped T-shirt III - Whiskey & Justice on the rocks

The ox-blood leather chair in the south facing offices of Esquire and Jones Solicitors was baked in August afternoon sun. The two solicitors...
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The Ripped T-shirt I - Him

After three pints of strong lager Mike was the king of the pool table in The Royal Oak Bars. Happy hour on drinks is 4 – 6 each afternoon including a...

The Ripped T-shirt II - Her

Verity Johnson’s wet hands trembled and slipped on the iPhone as she desperately tried to call her best friend Enid. An explosion of tears and pain...
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This is an enjoyable piece of

Posted on Sat, 05 Apr 2014

This is an enjoyable piece of work. 

 

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