That eye that watches you

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Ian Hamshaw

Ian Hamshaw does what he wants, when he wants and usually ends up bruised and skint but is always ready to have another go...Now he manipulates Google for his own amusement and wealth.

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The Drop Zone

The Drop Zone 1. Patrick Black was drinking potent local whiskey celebrating a decade as a free man roaming Asia drunk. At his own whim he’d entered...

The Ripped T-shirt III - Whiskey & Justice on the rocks

The ox-blood leather chair in the south facing offices of Esquire and Jones Solicitors was baked in August afternoon sun. The two solicitors...
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The Ripped T-shirt I - Him

After three pints of strong lager Mike was the king of the pool table in The Royal Oak Bars. Happy hour on drinks is 4 – 6 each afternoon including a...

The Ripped T-shirt II - Her

Verity Johnson’s wet hands trembled and slipped on the iPhone as she desperately tried to call her best friend Enid. An explosion of tears and pain...
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This is an enjoyable piece of

Posted on Sat, 05 Apr 2014

This is an enjoyable piece of work. 

 

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