earthygirl
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Story | Emptied Lands … | Rhiannonw | 27 | 9 years 2 months ago |
Story | running in the rain | Deliberately Ev... | 27 | 9 years 2 months ago |
Story | Displaced American | earthygirl | 2 | 9 years 4 months ago |
Story | And the Oscar Goes to … Garlic | earthygirl | 3 | 9 years 4 months ago |
Story | Migraine | earthygirl | 3 | 9 years 5 months ago |
Story | Faeries, Frogs and the Unborn Infant | earthygirl | 3 | 9 years 5 months ago |
Story | Monkey Grass | earthygirl | 1 | 9 years 5 months ago |
I really like your poem. It
Posted on Mon, 24 Aug 2015
I really like your poem. It has a cadence similar to a "running" pace and the adjectives used to describe the rain seem simple (not over done) and clearly place you in the runner's shoes. Nicely done!
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