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Woods' edge, evening, mid july. Walk through tall, wirey grass, make a dozen daddy long legs zizz up, spark-like in sideways sun, though each returns...
In shade most of the year, infront of a curving wall not quite road nor verge at tarmac's edge a large fuscia bush drops stiff silk particoloured red...
1966 of my comments have received 2026 Great Feedback votes
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Love the idea of memories
Posted on Sun, 02 Feb 2025
Love the idea of memories being like autumn leaves, and this made me think of carefree Summer days :
"easy going
times, when not afraid to take
a leap of faith: lulled by folklore"
You describe searching in the industrial estate really well! Perhaps Spencer could busk for money? Oh! Could breakdancing or something be one of his updates? Nordic walkers is a brilliant idea - just when he thought he was getting to grips with...
I love the energy in this! Have you been to more poetry slams, since your poem for last year? I think your writing teacher would be so proud, if they knew about your writing now. Your love for words, their music, comes loud and clear from every...
I am very glad re reading this helped you a little, and selfishly I really hope you continue with it, as I enjoy reading so much. All my good wishes xxx
Gaza is not the same as what happened to the Jews. But it does look, to me from far away and ignorance, more like what happened to the (non Jewish) Poles.
The biggest lesson we should take from history is not what happened to one group of...
Yes. Hard to hear so many speakers proclaim "We must never let this happen again" as this seems to relate to one lot of people only, while others can with equanimity be walled in, starved, bombed and forced into disease and homelessness
You are doing a brilliant job with Perfidia's character. This dinner party is really well set up for maximum tension :0) And, as always, you take great care with descriptions of food. Going back into this world you have created is always so...
Love the idea of memories
Posted on Sun, 02 Feb 2025
Love the idea of memories being like autumn leaves, and this made me think of carefree Summer days :
"easy going
times, when not afraid to take
a leap of faith: lulled by folklore"
Soon it will be Springtime, and I hope...
Read full commentPosted in Like Autumn Leaves Scatter In The Breeze
was just thinking it felt
Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025
was just thinking it felt like Spring, and here is your snow drop poem for this year :0) "Surprised by snowdrops" is perfect
Read full commentPosted in Surprise!
You describe searching in the
Posted on Fri, 31 Jan 2025
You describe searching in the industrial estate really well! Perhaps Spencer could busk for money? Oh! Could breakdancing or something be one of his updates? Nordic walkers is a brilliant idea - just when he thought he was getting to grips with...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You - Part 50
I love the energy in this!
Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2025
I love the energy in this! Have you been to more poetry slams, since your poem for last year? I think your writing teacher would be so proud, if they knew about your writing now. Your love for words, their music, comes loud and clear from every...
Read full commentPosted in Alive N‘ 25*
Very good way to highlight
Posted on Fri, 31 Jan 2025
Very good way to highlight this, well done!
Read full commentPosted in A story by Albert Ross
I am very glad re reading
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025
I am very glad re reading this helped you a little, and selfishly I really hope you continue with it, as I enjoy reading so much. All my good wishes xxx
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 23
Gaza is not the same as what
Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025
Gaza is not the same as what happened to the Jews. But it does look, to me from far away and ignorance, more like what happened to the (non Jewish) Poles.
Read full commentThe biggest lesson we should take from history is not what happened to one group of...
Posted in hiding in plain site
Yes. Hard to hear so many
Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025
Yes. Hard to hear so many speakers proclaim "We must never let this happen again" as this seems to relate to one lot of people only, while others can with equanimity be walled in, starved, bombed and forced into disease and homelessness
...
Read full commentPosted in hiding in plain site
This is wonderful, like Jane
Posted on Sun, 26 Jan 2025
This is wonderful, like Jane Austen, getting ready to untangle all the strings :0)
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 24
You are doing a brilliant job
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025
You are doing a brilliant job with Perfidia's character. This dinner party is really well set up for maximum tension :0) And, as always, you take great care with descriptions of food. Going back into this world you have created is always so...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 23
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