Di_Hard

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part 4

By Di_Hard on Sat, 09 Jan 2021

But Mary had no room for words. Her fear was big as a mountain. Tears spilled and a huge sob, like a tidal wave came up from her chest. The seagull...

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part 3 (redrafted)

By Di_Hard on Sat, 02 Jan 2021

Mary's heart was going "Boom, boom, boom" shaking her ribs. It was the only sound she could hear. Then Jake was there, shouting, "Can I have icecream...

part 2

By Di_Hard on Sat, 26 Dec 2020

Mary couldn't help laughing too, the first proper laugh since that Tuesday after school when she had not been allowed to go with Mum, then everyone...

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part 1

By Di_Hard on Sat, 12 Dec 2020

She hunched down into the car seat so her coat went up on each side like shields. It didn't stop him from kicking her, but he couldn't see she was...

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1863 of my comments have received 1916 Great Feedback votes

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Dive into this welcome of warm

Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024

Dive into this welcome of warm family life created by the very talented Monodemo for Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can

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I didn't know about this,

Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024

I didn't know about this, either, Thankyou. You set out the story very well, the idea of scavenging scraps of light in the darkness is beautiful

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that's a FABULOUS first line!

Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024

that's a FABULOUS first line! I LOVED this poem :0) "imprints of history get washed away". Wonderful

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looking forward to part 2

Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024

looking forward to part 2. This is a wonderful set of characters! I loved (well, that's perhaps not the right word) the detail about the Barbie doll's hair :0)

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It's not just that you have

Posted on Fri, 27 Sep 2024

It's not just that you have that fantastic memory, it's how you put everything together, carry the reader along with you! Real gift

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Ah. Wanting arguments sounds

Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024

Ah. Wanting arguments sounds like Vanessa feels there's too much smoothness, she wants texture and that means splinters, blisters, callouses in emotion? I am really looking forward to this conjured up argument :0) I do like how you cover the...

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I am SO GLAD you have kept

Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024

I am SO GLAD you have kept going with these :0)

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Brilliant! Thankyou for such

Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024

Brilliant! Thankyou for such a fabulous IP response, Rhiannon! I loved the rhythm and rhyme, too, but also liked very much the hearing and sight and feeling at the start, then the last bit thinking and wondering. I looked up the poem you...

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Another marvellous piece of

Posted on Tue, 24 Sep 2024

Another marvellous piece of writing from HarryC, this one about childhood experiences is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can

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Thankyou so much for this

Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024

Thankyou so much for this lovely response to the IP Jenny! I hope you are having a good day today xxx