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I have 179 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 545597 times and 283 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1857 of my 5,705 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1909 votes

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Gold cherry
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time travelling

at woods' edge shadow-silt nestles lumps of amber air floating ballrooms where midges dance brief lives away since before words on one side sun warm...
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Cherry

first day in senior school

Rain heavy air, clear, fresh colours drenched. I walk through clinging grasses like hands welcoming. Summer condensing on twig ends in rowan berries...
Gold cherry

calm before

trunk tethered galaxies of leaves wild weaves, wind owned. Waist high, light grained grasses spray. Green-good air an open mouth, bird-fled, waits...
Cherry

a sort of green

in autumn small, three-toed green, lizard dry stampedes down the steps' side dark green cloaking concrete with rustling possibilities or, lushly...

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1857 of my comments have received 1909 Great Feedback votes

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"blow wild;

Posted on Thu, 09 May 2024

"blow wild;
or gently stroke, touch mild:
soft or stiff on beach or cliff.

Sea mists flow in,
lose far cliffs,
alone in the world." this is wonderful Rhiannon!

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Posted in Shores ever changing, new, fresh

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Really good response to the

Posted on Sat, 04 May 2024

Really good response to the IP, thankyou

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Posted in When we Felt Sorry for Them

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I really like the role

Posted on Fri, 26 Apr 2024

I really like the role Spencer is taking on "That's a very nice cup of tea, Spencer". I wonder how Vanessa is shaping his personality by how she is, how she treats him? What might another robot be like in another couple? Everything about your...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 24

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Glad you chose to honour them

Posted on Tue, 30 Apr 2024

Glad you chose to honour them with one of your wonderful poems! I have always thought they are magical, fairytale flowers, they have such complex shapes, don't they? Wonder how grannies must have looked very flamboyant if their bonnets really...

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Posted in Columbine

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So sorry you cannot replace

Posted on Sun, 28 Apr 2024

So sorry you cannot replace your trees! That's a real shame when you are one of those too rare people who truly appreciate them, which is why I love reading your tree poems. You seem to go deep into Nature, into a vein that is beyond science,...

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Posted in Connecting With Trees

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That's clever! Seems to

Posted on Mon, 29 Apr 2024

That's clever! Seems to symbolise how we do not live in the moment, do not actually hold or smell things how we used to. "still life electric" is a brilliant phrase. The two references to oyster also, one all about the senses, the other all about...

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Posted in STILL LIFE

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This reminded me of the bit

Posted on Thu, 25 Apr 2024

This reminded me of the bit in one of the Hitch hikers books Restaurant at the End of the Universe, when the cow comes to their table to explain which parts of her would be best to eat. Also in the past trying to get something I could have when...

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Posted in Catatouille

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She does? Wow, that's

Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2024

She does? Wow, that's interesting! Kudos :0) I nearly tried, but then reckoned the vegan milk is so expensive anyway, probably not worth risking wasting it all if it didn't work. I get the yoghurt when it's reduced as a treat. Does Priyatelkata...

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Posted in Lactobacillus Bulgaricus or Bust!

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Listening to the news, we

Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2024

Listening to the news, we really are so lucky, as you say! I like very much how you make food sound like a force, like water or electricity, that can be blocked - your rhyme and rhythm helps with that feeling of movement

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Posted in Life's fuel

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"In our superstores the

Posted on Tue, 23 Apr 2024

"In our superstores the yoghurt aisles

Are measured not in feet but miles"

I had not thought about that. I guess like olive oil in Greece? Wonder what we have miles of? Crisps? Breakfast cereals?

Didn't know whether to...

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Posted in Lactobacillus Bulgaricus or Bust!

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