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I love the jackdaw bits if it
Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2021
I love the jackdaw bits if it helps! - and I hope you do put more in about what happened, but it's going to be difficult if you're doing it from the child's POV. It's definitely a story that needs to be told
Read full commentPosted in part 5
Where she throws all the
Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2021
Where she throws all the money into the water - it's so moving. Poor Mary
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Catching up - love the idea
Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021
Catching up - love the idea of being warm inside with your thoughts, waiting for Spring - thanks for this Jenny!
Read full commentPosted in Drifting On The Muse
we don't have them here as
Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021
we don't have them here as far as I know, or at least they don't seem to be as unwilded as in some areas - how frightening that they swooped at your cat!! Beautiful creatures though, as is this poem
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You took me right there with
Posted on Thu, 28 Jan 2021
You took me right there with you - thank you, and congratulations on the very well deserved pick!
Read full commentPosted in A Secret Forest
I don't remember the social
Posted on Sat, 09 Jan 2021
I don't remember the social worker having a name before - perhaps you could add her job along with her name when she's first mentioned in this part? I'm really enjoying this Di - please keep going!
Read full commentPosted in part 4
Ladybell, please don't worry
Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021
Ladybell, please don't worry about giving the wrong impression - 20 is still very young. I think we all assumed you were UK based and when we say 'school' here we mean actual school (4 - 18) whereas in many other countries it can also mean...
Read full commentPosted in How do you forgive a parent?
Ladybell I'm so sorry to read
Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021
Ladybell I'm so sorry to read about your worries which, as you say, must be amplified in the current situation. There are supposed to be measures in place where if you are in an abusive situation (and abuse isn't just physical) you absolutely don...
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Just read this for the first
Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2021
Just read this for the first time. It's beautifully done Di. You really capture the child's eye view of events in this piece (which I think I said about the previous part!). It's so sad. Do keep on writing!
Read full commentPosted in part 3 (redrafted)
yes, you have to be carefukl
Posted on Sun, 10 Jan 2021
yes, you have to be carefukl with some things don't you, and others not so much. But it's nice your animals had a treat at least!
Read full commentPosted in It Goes In The Fridge With Good Intensions ...........
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