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This is a great modern
Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2019
This is a great modern fairytale. If you decide to do any more work on it, perhaps that last paragraph could be a bit stronger? Lovely as it is though!
Read full commentPosted in The First Night of Spring
I had to read this one or
Posted on Fri, 05 Apr 2019
I had to read this one or twice - it's very imaginative!
Read full commentPosted in pondering
What a lovely positive
Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2019
What a lovely positive message in this piece!
Read full commentPosted in Perspective
beautiful description - that
Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2019
beautiful description - that evening walk sounds like one of those small things that bring a disproportionate joy. I love how we're lucky enough to get little glimpses into where people live!
Read full commentPosted in herring gull gallantry
if you're looking for
Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2019
if you're looking for suggestions Harry - this is set in the USA right? If so, kettles aren't really a thing there - even more so in the past (am guessing because of the typewriter). Also 'nip, sip' etc - pull instead of nip?
Read full commentPosted in Hunting for Duck (5)
Some vivid description in
Posted on Mon, 25 Mar 2019
Some vivid description in this thought provoking piece. Is it part of something longer?
Read full commentPosted in Jonathan Roven is Lost
What a lovely idea for the IP
Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2019
What a lovely idea for the IP Rhiannon! I especially like this one, but the others are great too. This would make a lovely collection to read aloud to very small children. Do you know someone who could illustrate them?
Read full commentPosted in Kids' Colours 3)
Some wonderful lines in this
Posted on Fri, 22 Mar 2019
Some wonderful lines in this joyful poem Di, (and you've just given me an idea for the new IP so thank you!)
is 'grren' a typo?
Read full commentPosted in gorse
Very pleased to hear things
Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2019
Very pleased to hear things ended on a high note TK - I don't think I would have done it either!
Read full commentPosted in Galaxy Part Four.
Another great little nature
Posted on Sat, 16 Mar 2019
Another great little nature poem and photo. Have you ever thought of making a small collection of these? Following on from your letter to your father, it would be a lovely legacy. Who knows what those views will look like in 100 years from now
Read full commentPosted in On Pippin’s Hill
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