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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 446991 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2103 of my 14,340 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2152 votes

2103 of my comments have received 2152 Great Feedback votes

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Such a sweet story! And the

Posted on Sun, 02 Jul 2017

Such a sweet story! And the sense of place and time is very well done.

'She beams at me, a sight worth missing Parkinson for' I love that line!

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Posted in The Rendezvous

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Lots to like in this partial

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017

Lots to like in this partial story - I really hope you let us know what he wishes for! If you're looking for suggestions I'd say it needs quite a bit of cutting down. I'm not sure alot of the preamble is necessary, for instance - and also there's...

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Posted in Missi - a fairy story

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Hi Cacophony - it's one of

Posted on Wed, 28 Jun 2017

Hi Cacophony - it's one of our terms and conditions that everything published on our site has to be in the english language. Could you please pop a translation under the main text? Thanks

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Posted in Tumblebun

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I like the ambuguity in this

Posted on Tue, 27 Jun 2017

I like the ambuguity in this piece Poppy - and it's made me hope it's about a real painting because I'd be very curious to see it!

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Posted in Not Me

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I like this bit of inner

Posted on Mon, 26 Jun 2017

I like this bit of inner voice - sounds very believable, sepecially as they justify the leaving. I'm sure it's deliberately very short but even so, I think there should be a bit more in that final paragraph (or make it into two) - make the change...

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Posted in You know what to do...

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'I've never heard one Muslim

Posted on Fri, 23 Jun 2017

'I've never heard one Muslim expressing sorrow or compassion for all the British people who were murdered by terrorists this year, including young girls.'

Just linking to this for your information (and anyone else reading). I'm sure it...

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Posted in Current Events: 6/22/17: 2

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