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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 461368 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Cherry

47˚ East 18˚ South 3

a continuation of something I started ages ago
Cherry

47˚ East 18˚ South 2

I have no idea what's going to happen next
Cherry

47˚ East 18˚ South

This might be the beginning of something. Could you please say if it makes you want to read more?

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2209 of my comments have received 2257 Great Feedback votes

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Some nice scene setting in

Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2022

Some nice scene setting in this first part. 

A couple of things:

twelve year’s old.

also, there's quite a lot of repeating of stuff, and it would read much better if you had a good edit. For example:

The first lesson...

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Posted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part One of Two)

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Loved this account and the

Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2022

Loved this account and the pics. You have such beautiful walks nearby Rhiannon, thank you for sharing them here

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Posted in Above Old Downton Lodge

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‘I personally don’t like

Posted on Sun, 11 Sep 2022

‘I personally don’t like horrors, but it’s the only genre where you get to be free and kill the monstrous bastards from your nightmares in any way imaginable.’

A killer line! and a well deserved cherry mono

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Posted in the forgotten stranger

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You deserve a medal of some

Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022

You deserve a medal of some kind for overcoming all those hurdles Rhiannon! Glad you didn't meet any angry farmers along the way! (isn't it illegal to fence in public footways?)

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Posted in Going on a Way-hunt!

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I hope you're going to submit

Posted on Tue, 28 Jun 2022

I hope you're going to submit this somewhere eventually Jane? It's very very good

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Posted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 17

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I think Ewan was testing if

Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022

I think Ewan was testing if he could post from his phone (you know, the posting glitch). I expect he's deleted them now which is why you can't access them anymore Di

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Posted in Sticky Wullie

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I can't better your earlier

Posted on Sun, 24 Apr 2022

I can't better your earlier comments onemore. What fascinating source materials you find - I'm always the richer for them as well as your poetry itself - thank you! I'll be returning to this later to re-read

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Posted in Angelus Novus

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The bravery of those who have

Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2022

The bravery of those who have protested in Russia is really something else, and I've heard some of the very young conscripts weren't even told they'd be fighting. This must be such a worrying time for you and your son. I hope a way out can be...

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Posted in Messages from Moscow

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This is brilliant - so funny

Posted on Sat, 19 Feb 2022

This is brilliant - so funny - would love to hear it read aloud. 

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Posted in Parables of Clippety (4) - Jellyfish

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Thank you so much for this

Posted on Mon, 20 Dec 2021

Thank you so much for this fascinating series Rhiannon - it's been a joy to read each day! I hope you manage to have a wonderful Christmas 

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