Jane Hyphen
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Legend of the Pah - 8 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
Cece Hughes Cece Hughes was what you might refer to as well preserved. At a distance she could have passed for somebody half her age, even close up...
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You learn about the sunshine
First you learn about the sunshine Long, blue sky days Beneath the boughs of trees Leaves flickering, lambent The sun is ever loyal It burns in...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 7
'Is everything okay?' ‘Yes,’ he nodded, ‘I just had a…..dream that’s all.’ ‘By the way Solo has been sick in the night, there’s bright yellow bile on...
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The Clappers
When it comes to school productions, there is usually a mixture of emotions; pride, embarrassment, pressure, discomfort, excitement and then there’s...
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You Looked Like You Had Lost
At low tide, the stillest sleep, and the vastness of this beach exposed. Memories littered, stories, half buried. I think that’s when I saw your eyes...
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That is really lovely lenchen
Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022
That is really lovely lenchen. I'd never heard it called Eve's Tears either. I love the name Eve, and Lilly of the Valley is a favourite flower and scent of mine so I will be calling it that name from now on. I have a tiny cluster of it from an...
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One of my favourite tales
Posted on Sat, 14 May 2022
One of my favourite tales because everything about it is fascinating and mostly very plausible. I like your modern take and anything which keeps this story alive. You have succeded in maintaining the sinisterness of the original.
Read full commentPosted in An Eternal Debt (The Pied Piper of Hamlin)
This really got into my head
Posted on Tue, 17 May 2022
This really got into my head Rhiannon. As I read, I could really imagine lying there, confined but still living through all the sounds from the open window. Reminded me of being a small child and sent to bed in summer when I wasn't at all sleepy...
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Love this, surreal and dreamy
Posted on Tue, 10 May 2022
Love this, surreal and dreamy. Really enjoyed, thank you for sharing.
Read full commentPosted in The Dead Want Their Moon Back
A clever and interesting poem
Posted on Fri, 06 May 2022
A clever and interesting poem Di. There's so many directions you can go in with a chrysalis, it's such a shocking peice of engineering and a shocking process for the creature involved but somehow it survives all that change. I enjoyed the uplift...
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It is sad that they interbred
Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022
It is sad that they interbred, the English ones being so much more delicate. A lovely tribute to a beautiful sight. We are so lucky if we can get out and see these gems in the natural world because they are free and better than man-made...
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It's the ones you write the
Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022
It's the ones you write the fastest because you'e writing from the heart. Really interesting read, you must have been a bright student to go off and do English Studies at university. The stint of temping no doubt helped to give you a grounding in...
Read full commentPosted in Ray's Memories age 19
Making me feel a bit queasy,
Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022
Making me feel a bit queasy, unwashed men, meatballs and sleazy hook-up apps, perhaps I'm just a bit delicate. That Dave is a bit of a freeloader. Uggly Puggly's random release back into the community sounds typical of the random and inconsistent...
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IIt's amazing how you have
Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022
IIt's amazing how you have written this in the very shape of the plant. Really enjoyed this tribute to a sticky, funny little plant.
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Reading this is akin to a
Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2022
Reading this is akin to a butterfly kiss. I love how the length echoes the length of a butterflies visit and 'soft as forgetting' is genius. They are magical little creatures.
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