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I have 416 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1035054 times and 534 of my stories have been cherry picked.
549 of my 2,896 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 581 votes

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Parables of Clippety (8) - The Flying Car

‘Oh and how I want to get my hands on him,’ Clare said, holding her fingers out, grabbing onto thin air, ‘I’m so excited now, Marni. Does my hair...
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Parables of Clippety (7) - Sniffer Dogs

‘Sorry, all done. Oh look at my hair, it’s gone nuts. It always does this when I want to look nice. I’m going to dampen it down a bit, then dry it...
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Parables of Clippety (6) - Never Been High

‘Angel’s Trumpet powder.’ ‘What?’ ‘That’s only one of the names for it. It’s all fine. People get so het up about drugs but honestly this is nothing...
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Parables of Clippety (5) - Fudge

After Clare had gone, Marni went back to her holdall, removed a carton of Ribena, pierced it with a straw, took a long suck of liquid and placed it...
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Parables of Clippety (4) - Jellyfish

The train pulled into Liverpool Lime Street and both women immediately became shiny eyed, the corners of their lips turned up and their hearts beat...

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549 of my comments have received 581 Great Feedback votes

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Lovely cute poem Jenny. It's

Posted on Tue, 20 Apr 2021

Lovely cute poem Jenny. It's hard to believe we felt like that once but the stars are still there for us, bright and unchanging. I think you're right that if we think hard enough we can still feel that way.  I love 'absorbed vitality with...

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Posted in Before We Kissed Goodnight

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Interesting how people leave

Posted on Mon, 05 Apr 2021

Interesting how people leave litter just feet away from bins. It's almost as if they are trying to make a point but they don't think about what actually happens to their litter afterwards. The road I drive to work in South Oxfordshire it...

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Posted in Littering in the Time of the New National Labour Government (It's Cleanup Time!) : Part 2

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Beautiful descriptions of sea

Posted on Thu, 25 Mar 2021

Beautiful descriptions of sea and sky and the wonderful character of a dolphin and all its playful antics. It's hard to believe an animal with so much presence could ever really die. Thanks for sharing, I very much I enjoyed reading.

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Posted in The Last Time I Saw Fungie (2005)

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Stollen, ha ha. This has

Posted on Tue, 23 Mar 2021

Stollen, ha ha. This has cheered me up - thank you for cherries and pick of the day. 

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Posted in I am a Fruit Cake

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This is really striking and

Posted on Sun, 07 Mar 2021

This is really striking and quite apt for forthcoming mother's day nonsense. It's so hard for me to imagine this but it's happened to a couple of my friends and it's always with them. Your poem is an eloquent, sharp and moving. I love the last...

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Posted in My Mother’s Name

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So interesting and moving.

Posted on Mon, 01 Mar 2021

So interesting and moving. Sometimes a stranger, in a poorer circumstance than your own, can really connect with you and when than happens you don't forget them. I know that kind of dirt that isn't of the earth, it's filth. How do these souls...

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Posted in Hand Washing, Glasgow Central

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So strong all barriers must

Posted on Wed, 24 Feb 2021

So strong all barriers must fall. Yes, so much is happening just this week, busy birds and buds colouring up, there is no stopping nature. The first verse is all winter and then you unfurl the vigor spring. Wonderful.

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Posted in Getting Ready

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Sad, quiet and beautiful. The

Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2021

Sad, quiet and beautiful. The opposite of love. Very interesting poem. Today my daughter was walking along the street, a man carrying a large, expensive bunch of roses (for his other half presumably) ogled her and winked at her.  Love is a...

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Posted in The Opposite of Love

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I've so enjoyed reading this

Posted on Fri, 22 Jan 2021

I've so enjoyed reading this and kept thinking about it throughout the day. Amazing and well deserved pick of the month. 

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Posted in To a Lone Sailor

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We can positively hear

Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2021

We can positively hear ourselves getting older during these months and we are drained of colour under these clouds. Thanks for your comment.

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Posted in The Edge of Colour

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