UKA is closing. Nostalgia about - something to do with memory...and Spring walks. Was a poem I fell asleep in a chair writing... tooo long on and on ..a few polaroid verses here, more prosey .Still to long! but, for the record, Hail! Spring! (08) Comment: "It's a bit boring...." Comment: "I told you I fell asleep writing it!"
Whitened minimalism is for fridges
Posted on Mon, 11 May 2020
before shopping day...only benefit I can see is easier dusting. I am presently escaped from a spreadsheet, it has eight columns, x129 students, and each minimilistic little box has to have a number in it, some involving percentage calculations,...
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Ghostly transference and so says the
Posted on Mon, 11 May 2020
the link - they'd make a Tarot pack or two, his art - memory attached to object, object to experience...and remembering, the object or memory morphing from a treasure I thought, brought home from a gallery, to a pocket watch, and back again -...
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What have you done! In this
Posted on Tue, 12 May 2020
What have you done! In this descriptive musing we may now have a clearer visual on the subject of Being :Oo I ought to read again really...I shall! THis is nice as prosey lines long and thoughtful - and would make a cracking poem, aranged more...
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Turning BJ into a toad is a white witchy thing to do?
Posted on Sun, 10 May 2020
going through the cabinet...can't think where you'd have to stop to lose your credentials and move to the darkside? No. Still listing here....
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...there they go! hoppityhop....
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THat is so sweet - cor! the
Posted on Sun, 10 May 2020
THat is so sweet - cor! the vowels of a stream! *faints* - must read again...It would be soft of the rock to not feel the tenderness in this - grey shoots - nice, silvery reeds came to mind, as do river trees - lovely poem!
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That's the best end line -
Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020
I love your deer poem. Super!
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but the dew is the morning
Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020
but the dew is the morning caught...! Ok...it' not. Penitence to metanoia is such a good line - do those beads evaporate or fall? The transformation idea in this poem, I wondered if spiders cry? Your sad lopsided half smiler here, sits in...
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It's a great poem. A haunting
Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020
It's a great poem. A haunting, by object - your tour sent chills. Really good!
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Really like this poem -
Posted on Thu, 07 May 2020
the senses which orientate us..the sounds, the nature, the inhabitants - all, the archetecture of our memories - this poem needed a bridge in it! And hints of maybes..uncertainty - last lines make it so your poem is exactly what history feel like...
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Very sweet poem. Enjoyed.
Posted on Thu, 07 May 2020
Very sweet poem. Enjoyed.
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